Hi there!Before I begin I apologize for my bad English. I can't express myself very well but this time I really REALLY have to write something, beacuse, you know, I simply ENJOY your work.I played a lot of visual novel before and this genre, the mystery, is my favourite. Can you imagine how intrigued I was when I finished to play the prologue of your story?Your work captured me since the beginning: the picture, the music, the scene...simply amazing.Your characters are interesting and emblematic and the way you described them absolutely well-done. It's not simply to write something dramatic without ending up producing something vulgar: you use blood but in extremely effective way and, most of all, perfectly balanced with a good dosage of psychological terror.Moreover, your writing style striked: simply but incisive. Perfect for a story like yours. This was demonstrate by the fact that you produced such a great work without using particular elaborate tricks.Besides so far I found your choices realistic and the fight scenes really well described.In conclusion an excellent start.I hope you'll decide to continue this story soon...personally I will play it. For sure! :)
It's been a while since I've been so intrigued by an OELVN. The writing was solid, the pacing great, and while there are still some rough spots, I loved the goosebumps this gave me. The brisk writing suited the story perfectly.I really, really hope you continue this story...I would play it in a heartbeat.