niedziela, 13 marca 2011

Prologue download

Updated prologue, 1.1 download:

Combined Win/Linux/Mac :

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2 komentarze:

  1. Hi there!
    Before I begin I apologize for my bad English. I can't express myself very well but this time I really REALLY have to write something, beacuse, you know, I simply ENJOY your work.
    I played a lot of visual novel before and this genre, the mystery, is my favourite.
    Can you imagine how intrigued I was when I finished to play the prologue of your story?
    Your work captured me since the beginning: the picture, the music, the scene...simply amazing.
    Your characters are interesting and emblematic and the way you described them absolutely well-done. It's not simply to write something dramatic without ending up producing something vulgar: you use blood but in extremely effective way and, most of all, perfectly balanced with a good dosage of psychological terror.
    Moreover, your writing style striked: simply but incisive. Perfect for a story like yours. This was demonstrate by the fact that you produced such a great work without using particular elaborate tricks.
    Besides so far I found your choices realistic and the fight scenes really well described.

    In conclusion an excellent start.
    I hope you'll decide to continue this story soon...personally I will play it. For sure! :)

  2. It's been a while since I've been so intrigued by an OELVN. The writing was solid, the pacing great, and while there are still some rough spots, I loved the goosebumps this gave me. The brisk writing suited the story perfectly.

    I really, really hope you continue this story...I would play it in a heartbeat.